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But its still rlly good
I really like the shading because it gives the work a really strong sense of 3-Dness. The lips look also very natural.
However, there are some things you might want to look at.
The eyes look great, but the lower eyelashes look a bit clumpy and fake. It might have been the effect you were looking for, but I think you could try spreading the eyelashes out.
Also, the fingers' angle look a bit unnatural. I think you should try playing with the shading and the length of the finger sections.
I like the effect that the fingers over the eye creates. I think it adds quite a bit to this work.
Great job!!
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