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Submitted: September 16, 2012
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Girl Gone Wildby *Miss-Misery1313

Traditional Art / Drawings / People

A drawing of Madonna from her "Girl Gone Wild" video with my own little twist.

5 hours
Ebony Pencil, 9B-HB pencils, colored pencils, tortillions, Q-tips

Critique by ~ZapDraws Sep 16, 2012, 7:53:11 PM

I love the rendering on the face, especially the nose. It doesn't look too harsh. The bits of color add a nice touch, but they're just a tad too dark to really pop off the image. The hair seems to need more rendering, especially compared to the face. The lighting is obviously very strong, but the hair, especially on the left side, seems to just "chunk" rather than flow. That actually detracts from what is a very strong and bold portrait.

This can be easily fixed by simply outlining more of the natural flow of the hair, fading those details in the stronger areas of light, but not entirely fading it out. Even if a smudging tool get used on those lines, they still create a more natural appearance of flow.

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