Hello, this is *lizziecat1279 from #Project-LEARN, here for your regularly scheduled critique. Before I start, I want to let you know that this is a very good work, and however I come across I am thinking about how adorable this is. That said, let's begin. One thing that stands out to me are the eyes, and I believe you did awesome on those. The "points" of the pupils could be a bit sharper, but other then that they are simply gorgeous. Same with the cute little muzzle and mouth. However, something I think you could do better would be the fur in general. It looks very blocky, when fur is very soft. I see that you defined the area around the kitten's chin, but on the reference that is caused by shadows in that area. The way you have drawn it here it appears to be darker fur, or that there is a block of something right behind the cheeks. The neck appears to be a bit on the small side here when comparing it to your reference photo. For animals, the neck starts in about the same place as a human's neck, it's the eyes that are placed differently. I've noticed that your human pictures are beautifully accurate, and you can transfer some of your knowledge to animals. Most of the things that I see that can be improved relate to the general softness of it, which is something that can be easily worked on. You managed to keep the stripes pretty close to the reference, which is impressive. Overall good job ^^
One thing that stands out to me are the eyes, and I believe you did awesome on those. The "points" of the pupils could be a bit sharper, but other then that they are simply gorgeous. Same with the cute little muzzle and mouth.
However, something I think you could do better would be the fur in general. It looks very blocky, when fur is very soft. I see that you defined the area around the kitten's chin, but on the reference that is caused by shadows in that area. The way you have drawn it here it appears to be darker fur, or that there is a block of something right behind the cheeks.
The neck appears to be a bit on the small side here when comparing it to your reference photo. For animals, the neck starts in about the same place as a human's neck, it's the eyes that are placed differently. I've noticed that your human pictures are beautifully accurate, and you can transfer some of your knowledge to animals.
Most of the things that I see that can be improved relate to the general softness of it, which is something that can be easily worked on. You managed to keep the stripes pretty close to the reference, which is impressive. Overall good job ^^
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